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**DONOTDELETE**
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Finally... Writing a story can sometimes be difficult. At certain points, you have to reveal many hints of future directions. Some even far-reaching. Without being obvious, without attracting attention. Another nuisance which troubles me: descriptive passages.
I am lousy at combining dialog with descriptions. But nevertheless, I keep trying. And miserably failing. So forgive me if dialog is unbalanced. I can only assure that we are not even approaching the interesting parts. You see, I have those flowcharts and diagrams. <font color=yellow> [shadow grin] </font color=yellow> By the time I need them, I hope to improve it.
So here goes the fourth chapter, titled <a target="_blank" href=http://my.tele2.ee/lennier/b5/fanfic/shadow/contents.htm>Changing Courses</a>.
Criticism is welcome.
I am lousy at combining dialog with descriptions. But nevertheless, I keep trying. And miserably failing. So forgive me if dialog is unbalanced. I can only assure that we are not even approaching the interesting parts. You see, I have those flowcharts and diagrams. <font color=yellow> [shadow grin] </font color=yellow> By the time I need them, I hope to improve it.
So here goes the fourth chapter, titled <a target="_blank" href=http://my.tele2.ee/lennier/b5/fanfic/shadow/contents.htm>Changing Courses</a>.
Criticism is welcome.